Do you know where I am?
This is a more creative piece I did a while back, I hope you like it. If you don't, please leave an angry comment rife with profanity... m'kay....
Do you know where I am?
I’m lost in the crowd
Pushed one way
Shoved another
Pulled deeper in the crowd
I should have brought a map
It’s like a moral mosh pit
Everyone is yelling
Like the man in front
He’s saying things that I don’t like
But I’m still trying to be polite
Tapping on shoulders and quaintly asking “excuse me?”
But I’m not being heard
In this crowd
Of yelling
Of screaming
Of pushing and shoving
But I’m still here
Still being polite
Though not being heard I think I’ll keep trying
Until the noise starts dying
Maybe then I’ll be heard
Instead of tapping on shoulders
Trying to get to the head of the crowd
To talk to the man in front
About the things he says
And the things he does
Without yelling
Without screaming
Without pushing or shoving
Just being polite.
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very nice!
seems to me like you could be in a lot of places.. somewhere that has a "boss-man" or "leader" telling the regular people what to do.. seems to me like you are in america.
- Ava Lowery
Sorry but...
I didn't mean the title to be a legitimate question... Sorry... lol
- The Magnificent Mr. Norman